Monday, 18 March 2013

My Draft

Miss, in this draft, i put my supporting detail.


Gravity: Worth or Worthless?
Introduction
Have you ever wondered what will happen to the world if there is no gravity? People cannot see gravity with their bare eyes and thus they don’t even notice what role does gravity plays in their lives. Generally, gravity is a force of attraction between objects due to their masses (Christina, 2011). If there is no gravitational force, everything would be completely flat and featureless, and definitely this may cause troubles towards human beings, natural surroundings, and also non-living things.
Body Paragraph
There are several effects towards human being if there is no gravity especially to perform their daily routine. It must be difficult for people because they cannot eat in a proper condition and sleep comfortably on the bed. There will be no more muscle building because everything is floating and weightless. In addition, people cannot perform multitasking jobs and it would more difficult compared to a world with gravitational forces.
It will as well affect the natural surroundings if the world has no gravity. For example, forest, ocean, skies, mountain, dessert, pond/lake and rivers will rip apart from their places. Thus, it will also affect things that live in them including aquatic life, corals, sands and other creatures. Moreover, atmosphere will disappear and it will cause death for a living mechanism such as trees that cannot growth in fact the animal cannot live in a properly condition is one of death causes to all life forms(Christina, 2011).
      Next is the consequence that non-living thing will experience if there is no gravity. Variety of non-living things such as buildings, houses, roads, vehicles, bridges, and others cannot attach to the earth. These non-living things will be bumping everywhere and cannot be built properly. In addition, the entire mineral inside the earth will drift apart and not in a proper state (Christina, 2011). Thus, the mineral also will be floating around and bumping everywhere.
Conclusion
Without gravity, everything on earth and above the earth would be moving freely, and become mass less it affected the land, ocean, airspace and definitely human. Any daily activities will be so extremely difficult to perform and it can make live become complicated. Overall, gravity is one of the fundamental element of the universe.

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Outline


Introduction
Have you ever wondered what will happen to the world if there is no gravity? People cannot see gravity with their bare eyes and thus they don’t even notice what role does gravity plays in their lives. Generally, gravity is a force of attraction between objects due to their masses (Christina, 2011). If there is no gravitational force, everything would be completely flat and featureless, and definitely this may cause troubles towards human beings, natural surroundings, and also non-living things.

Body
Main idea 1: Hard to do daily routine.
Main idea 2: Affect the surrounding.
Main idea 3: Affect to non-living things.

Conclusion
Without gravity, everything on earth and above the earth would be moving freely, and become mass less it affected the land, ocean, airspace and definitely human. Any daily activities will be so extremely difficult to perform and it can make live become complicated. Overall, gravity is one of the fundamental elementof the universe.